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Re: Lovebirds
This to me is weak in comparison to ur other....is ur head in the clouds lol
Just the bouncing in a cage stuck me as odd as well as the above comment. Not sap but lacks briness if u like, now i nearly merged two posts from another poem and said this has the audacity and 'words/ideas u spoiled us with. so i blame u either way, I like ur idea and i know you can make it lovelier or more powerful even if they r birds r us.
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