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A Ritual I Dare Not Speak
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10-10-2007, 10:32 AM
Ryankia
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Re: A Ritual I Dare Not Speak
No, the lines need to have a similar meter/rhythm.
An extra word or a missing word can cause the flow of a piece to change dramatically.
(I will give further comments shortly)
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