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Re: Promise
wow! and ur just getting into this u say?
This may be me and am tired but, ur use of promise here seems strange and it could be a language thing
I promised to myself
I would say 'I promised myself or I made a promise to myself.
But it is truly a wonderful poem and the intermittent snatches, the promises amid the constant flow of ur verses worked so well. Lovely, vincent.
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