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Originally Posted by tranquilitysin
I am not much of a wester reader but I enjoyed your story.
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I on the other hand don't mind western yet I do agree it is a good story or a beginning of one >.>
One thing bothered me though....
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"Mebbe. Let's talk as we walk to the doc's."
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Perhaps reword it so you aren't receiting poetry in the middle of a western ><