Quote:
Hope too high, dreams too high;
however was he going to reach,
soon enough I would just let it go by.
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Few things with this verse...
question mark for the end of line 2 and capital letter for the start of line 3
Also, did u mean 'hope' as opposed to 'hopes'
I enjoyed your daisies and clover idea and again with the apple and orange. I thought it apity you couldn't do the same re the middle verses......make it similarly twisted.
Unless the blind ref is one?
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