Let me just tell you that first stanza was just...on spot BRILLIANT!
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You're like the dance of the flames,
Like the glow of the moon.
The leaves turned red,
The grass turned green
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Absolutely beautiful!
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I will always keep you,
In my dreams, close to my head.
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I'm reading, I'm loving, and then I'm laugh at "close to my head" Strangely put!
WOW! Ta-Sauce. This is seriously one of the best poems I've ever read. And by far on my top favorites. Wow, just...wow...so freaking amazing.