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Old 13-10-2007, 09:47 AM
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Re: Found
Oh do you think it would sound better if it was:

And like an orange falling from an apple tree?

And the last line of the first stanza...is off...I'm not sure how to fix it...

And...I thought I put love and romance, how come its under heartbreak/sorrow?
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