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Re: Found
No and if u can help it ..it seems fine as is
the last line i amsure u can do better with
Like an orange falling from an apple tree,
he found me when I least expected;
in my mind and heart he is all I see.
you could play on the fruit and use core... or similar
From the core of my heart he is all to me
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