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Re: Found
I liked it, to put it very simply.
I'm not a very good poet when it comes to poem structure, so I'll reserve my comments about the rhythm/meter and things. However, I found it refreshing that the 3 line stanzas had the first and last line rhyme.
The reason the innocence shines through in this poem is probably because of the simplicity, which is a trait often associated with innocence.
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