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Old 17-10-2007, 03:17 AM
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Re: Mirror II
To me, some of the flow is disrupted, and I am not sure if it is the lack of punctuation or if the word choices/order themselves are the cause.

Despite the technical problems, I loved the concept! Well delivered!

~Ryan
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