[LullabyHearts]

A black and white vulture watches keenly… waiting, perhaps?

Your dots look weird, strange spacing between them.
"keenly...waiting"

This edge… so alluring.

Odd spacing again. And I don't particularly like the choppy shortness of it. Add a similie.

If I could, I’d speak a thousand things, a thousand different feelings pouring out all at once.

If I could, I’d speak a thousand things, a thousand different feelings pouring out all at once.

I would've perfered to see a series of three "thousand..."

I’ll recognize you by the way my heartbeat changes when I’m near you.

Beautiful.

Maybe I’ll come alone again, only to stand at the edge of the cliff, and maybe then, the wind will push me harder, and I’ll float off the edge.

By far my favorite part of this whole thing. Really sums up everything.