I really enjoyed this Steph. The structure was great, the "yes" reinforcing the voice of the person. The last line as well, ending on possible... even though it seems you have come to a decision it is not possible it still leaves the reader thinking of the possibilities... hehe
What else I loved is you captured what it is like for one person to try and warn another from their own experience but it just never seems to work. We all have to make mistakes on our own, no matter how much someone tells us... it does not sink in until you are living in it.
Anyways, really I love this. Glad you posted
