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Re: Addiction
Brilliant metaphor, parallels a lot of things... emotions as extreme as the addiction and withdrawls from heroin and/or morphine. With that said...
I loved the freeform and flow of this. The sounds your meshed in really created to the haunting images. "my drug that beckons" the ownership is perfect, very true to a user, an addict... and the beckoning, well yes. Well captured.
The lines that stand alone were also well done. Pleas, begging to get out of the cycle.
Anyways, I think you carried this across wonderfully... very different style from you and you wear it well.
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"when one person suffers from a delusion it is called insanity. When many people suffer from a delusion it is called religion."
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