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Re: Ethaniel
Thanks for the comments, Rudy.
But honestly, I think I need to work on this one a lot more. The reason I liked it so much when I wrote it was because of the state of mind I was in when I wrote it. However, now that I've read and written a lot more, it does seem like something is missing in this story.
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