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Re: I, Zombie
Haw haw! 2 minutes to midnight... Good song, good song. Wasted Years is better though.
Anyway, back to the story, The beginning of this was fantastic! I was really digging into it. The way that it flowed was very unique, even though you were missing a lot of detail that could have improved the story ten-fold.
Over all, good job, but like someone mentioned before, try to stray away from cliche things and possibly copyrighted names and labels.
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The oldest and strongest emotion of mankind is fear. The oldest and strongest fear is fear of the unknown. -H.P. Lovecraft
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