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Old 22-10-2007, 05:23 AM
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Re: Ethaniel

Hmmm, his genius didn't really show too much significance in the story. If anything it wasted my time. Maybe he should have just been a nerd from the start, and not really some supernatural being. Then when you mentioned the full moon, I thouhgt it was going to be a story about a were-wolf.

Anyway, this story kept me reading. Is it the most spectacular allusion to Romeo and Juliette? Not really, but it had its strong points.

And what happens next?

Mom comes to visit and sees the razor blade in the girl's hand.

Muahahah! The plot thickens!
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