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Re: The Curse (Chapter 1)
Having seen it pointed out, yeah do see what you mean by the long sentences. Now in re-reading realise needs to be addressed. 
Thank you Jay for your comments and relieving my fears that ideas might be OTT - pleased you found enjoyable and interesting – means a lot m8. 
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Time; an elusive element to a creative mind. For the story burns to be expressed, flooding the mind, seeking an outlet. Red brimmed eyes and dark circles fore-tells a deeper story, echoed in a mirrors reflection. - my story.
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