22-10-2007, 11:07 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: India
Posts: 1,416
Total Points: 148,882.89
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Re: Ethaniel
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Hmmm, his genius didn't really show too much significance in the story. If anything it wasted my time. Maybe he should have just been a nerd from the start,
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I know. I can understand where you're coming from.
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And what happens next?
Mom comes to visit and sees the razor blade in the girl's hand.
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hehehe.
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