[~HorseHeart~]

well i have to say it was.......intresting
well first off Ron even though in egypt would have already been there we all know and the Grangers should know how to communicate like that from hermione and owls....also too fast paced but if you were to make it different nothing to do with Harry Potthead (lol j/k potter) and then think of yourself in bed hovering between consiousness and what u would like to hear i wouldnt want to know that doctors needed to fix me up for something i would like to hear that someone would like to say something to me someone who doesnt want me to fall back but i would want to hear im okay not that i needed to be fixed up its a shock relief when someone loses their leg you say 'ur okay' not 'we're goingto try to get you leg back on' i would freak out and scream so the dialouge would sound better fixed and well harry doesnt act like that.....nor hermione