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Old 26-10-2007, 11:47 PM
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Re: A Wake

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It staggered with a zombie's gait.
. Drool flowed down a twisted face,
. And flies accompanied its pace.
Demonic babble did it state.
. . . As flies are minions of the Devil,
. . . They were convinced the thing was evil.
I love this part. I can see this guy walking along saying, "Hey guy's lookie here , I'm still alive."

But nobody can understand him.

Very, very, good piece. Reminded me of some of the rhymes I use to hear when I was a kid.
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