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Re: Hours Ago...
It's good to go. I'm ready for karma--my laziness.
You talk about underdeveloped and rough, that's how I write like in my journal(but a lot more underdeveloped. You can say under-underdeveloped!)
As for the incompleted sentences, or singular word, it's a technique I'm trying to get use to. Other than that, I tried to listen to what you typed.
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Slow bleak awakening from the morning dream,
Brings me in contact with this sudden day,
I am alive—this I.
Last edited by Peppy; 27-10-2007 at 10:21 AM.
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