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Old 29-10-2007, 02:34 AM
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Re: Promise

Vince, a really nice poem.
You seem to forget that English is your second language when you start writing, and that's absolutely amazing.

If this is one of your first few poems, it's even more amazing. When I started writing poetry, my poems were all pretty short.
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