|
Re: Shadows
Oh, that was eerie. I loved it! Your voice and diction were amazing, the darkness of the innerself was prevalent enough. I also adored your use of the word "dopleganger" but that's just a weird quirk of mine. Great flow and style. Sorry I can't find any flaws to outright call on.
__________________
It started out as a feeling
Which then grew into a hope
Which then turned into a quiet thought
Which then turned into a quiet word
And then that word grew louder and louder
Til it was a battle cry
|