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Old 30-10-2007, 11:55 AM
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Re: A insular

Is it not “An Insular?”

What about…
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Airs of freedom kisses my chin
Green islands lack chauvinism
Life has free margins
We have journeyed to Wonderland and Wonder Woman is our aunts.
What is…
Quote:
Children have beautiful toes that won all of mercies of goddess all over?
For me personally, I found this piece a bit abrupt because of verb usage and lack of more punctuation. Here in this submission, there are many beautiful images but the presentation is hasty.
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