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Re: Cry
poetry is not using big words or emotional text alone, but the feeling that must be conveyed should be such that it should purify any soul. thats whats left to be desired.
what i did like was the fact that you wrote it from your heart, this one, and which is why the innocence of this piece is very revealing.. but i do believe editing is necessary for all poems, and the same applies here. not great editing, but a go through to tune it up if the author is interested in posting it.
Hirak.
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