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Old 02-11-2007, 04:55 AM
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Re: Those Damned Americans

I enjoy a good satire. This one reminded me of an idea I had once of a story about people surviving Armageddon as the earth is being given to Satan. I think Satan comes off as too weak, I mean he is the prince of darkness I am sure he would have tried some cruel torture before going to god. I also think that the story may have been stronger if there was more description of where they are and how they react to each other, but then again I see you were going strictly for a conversation. Still I enjoyed this piece, if I go to hell I will look for Johnny Cochran.
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