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Old 03-11-2007, 01:54 AM
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To Try

You play, I stay...
Behind.
You love, I try.
But, in the end...
I hate, and I cry.
You walk, I rest...
My head.
You do; I try my best.
I will sleep,
And dream. While...
My emotions are predictable and cheap.

Revision 1. :
You play, I stay...
Behind.
You love, I try.
But, in the end...
I hate, and I cry.
You walk, I rest...
My head.
You do; I try my best.
I will sleep,
And dream. While...
Emotions, predictable and cheap.

Revision 2. :
You play, I stay...
Behind.

You love, I try.
But, in the end...
I hate, and I cry.

You walk, I rest...
My head.
You do; I try my best.

I dream, while asleep.
Emotions,
Predictable and cheap.

Last edited by nobodylaiceps; 29-05-2008 at 03:05 AM. Reason: needed improvemnt
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