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Re: Those Damned Americans
Ha. Lovely satirical piece (there really aren't enough of these!). The dialogue was very good, the sly swipes at the government, capitalism, etc very well placed. The alternation of the red/black text lines also worked very well to indentify characters and eliminate confusion. Well done!
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The fog comes
on little cat feet.
It sits looking
over harbor and city
on silent haunches
and then moves on.
-Carl Sandburg
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