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Re: A Painful Life
The only problems I have with this is she was raised as an assassin from the age of seven then why was she so soft hearted and tried to kill herself? I don't get that. What was with the assassins living in the jungle together in a large group? Most assassins are loners by habit and they would have trust issues. i.e. Keeping their true identity a secret is easier if there are less people who know who you are and what you do.
Not a bad read though.
Last edited by maxaynjj; 05-11-2007 at 02:03 AM.
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