Thread: Gary the Ghost
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Old 06-11-2007, 07:17 PM
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Re: Gary the Ghost
A good idea well executed, I thought. Even within a short story you managed to give it a feeling of momentum which was helped, rather than hindered, by the odd cliche.
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