[niamhoneill]

I have to be honest, I'm afraid I didnt like this story. I didn't think it was very well written. It is littered with gramatical errors, which obviously is frustrating for the reader. I also disliked the character, not because she cheated, but because she was so utterly egotistical, therefore I was not interested in the outcome of the piece. I hope you don't take offence at my honesty.