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Re: Compromise
Your mid line capitalization struck me as odd, any particular reason for that minus Earth being a proper noun?
Other than that I loved the bit about the sand in a man's hand and the burden he feels, I am not sure the depth of the metaphor but it is easy to relate to on a multitude of levels.
The last line was by far my favorite, seriously what a brilliant concept. I love things that get me thinking and this entire piece did just that. I would love to hear what your thoughts were as you were writing this and as Ryan mentioned, where some of the word choices came from.
Beautiful piece of work though, something to be proud of!
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