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Old 10-11-2007, 07:02 PM
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Re: The Replicator

Neat. You kept me reading it all in one go, and it was a pleasant read. It really gave the feeling of something worth being read. I spotted only a few clumsy passages and almost no typing or gramar errors. A good idea, well put into action. I think this story is all about its voice, leaving everything else as not that valuable. Keep it up.
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