omfg other 40k players! whoa! suh-wweet!
I was just browsing and this story's name caught my eye, and what do ya know, warhammer.
Good to see stories based on that world.
This sounds like a narration of a battle you've played in DOW.
Opinion: I don't think Space Marines have much emotion besides zeal, hatred, vengence, vindictation, and so on. (
spell check says those aren't real words lol) Protect the Emperor.
Another point: pulse rifles are supposed to be very strong...
The last line was awesome.