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Old 14-11-2007, 05:39 AM
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Re: Story of Him and Her

Hi,

I am an unsentimental person so I don't think I got out of the story what the other reviewers did. However, I can see that if romance is the kind of thing one is into then it is a nice story. I however, kept waiting for something to happen, some twist. The guy in the story sounded too perfect, although maybe that was the idea. There were some parts that I had to re-read as the tenses were a little confused at points.

So, although not for me, nice enough story.
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