Thread: Addiction Chapter One
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Old 14-11-2007, 02:43 PM
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Re: Addiction Chapter One
I was kind of confused about the gender of the character in the beginning, maybe I just missed something. Anyway, It was a fun quick read.
One small thing i spotted,
"I had been sitting in"
i think i would be on
good work
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