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Good catch, purpulfantom! I would agree that the sentence doesn't quite fit.

How about this as a replacement paragraph:

"So I trudged down the sidewalk heading for my favorite coffee shop. It was right over...no. Hold on a sec. It was down this block...no. It was...well, frack! The address was on the stupid memory chip! If didn't find the coffee shop, and hopefully find the chip too, I would probably miss the meeting. Come to think of it I didn't even know what the fricking meeting was about! Well, I had to do something. So I just started walking."

If there's anything else you think is iffy, I'd be happy to hear it.

Thanks so much for your comments!

Cheers!

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