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Old 16-11-2007, 11:59 AM
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Re: Losing My Memory

I like the pacing of this story, from a harried lifestyle to a slower one.
It's a reminder, not to rely too much on technological advancements and simply enjoy what nature has to offer.
As the saying goes, "stop and smell the flowers".

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The only command protocol that worked reliably was Kinesthetic-Usage for Retrievable Systems Erudition ( KURSE ).
However you came up with this acronym description- keep it coming because it's hilarious! I like the pun there.

Like the way you injected humor here. Kudos!

Totally agree with purpulfantom , this story's publishable.

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