Thread: Losing My Memory
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Old 17-11-2007, 02:57 AM
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Re: Losing My Memory
I think this story needs mostly nitpicking, rather than anything major. This is the advantage of having a bunch of readers who can get back to you on it!

And that new paragraph is great. Now it fits.
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