['Ginnis]

Amamzing imagery throughout the entire piece. Really, lovely with the almost empty feeling in the beginning. I was reminded of the scene from The Sixth Sense where you find out that its the mother who was actually poisoning her daughter...anyways, that's so not the point. I feel that your ending was slightly brash though, your story was very well paced but then you get smacked with this different style that doesn't quite compliment the previous flow. If you wished theres plenty you could do to expand on this. Good work, though.