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Re: The Clockmaker Diary: entries 00001 - 00003
I liked the tone of the piece, and it definitely drew me in. That being said, it reads like an intro and feels far from complete. We're just kind of hanging here with a lot of things unexplained. I really like the format though and would love to see more. Cheers!
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In the 1990s, the number of fictional stories depicting nuclear holocaust dropped off. Everyone thought things would be ok. Now its 2013 and I'm writing a story about a nuclear holocaust. This one is true.
--From the Journal of Lexica Jones
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