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Old 25-11-2007, 07:54 AM
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Re: Mirrors & Hearts

Subtle, simple, and lovely. I'm afraid Ryankia has already pointed out most of my comments (I agree, commas would help), so I'll just say how much I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing!
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