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Old 25-11-2007, 07:59 AM
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Re: Poems Do Not A Book Make

Good, and an interesting perspective. However, I really wish you would have stayed with the 'adding one line to each stanza' idea you started with in the first three stanzas. Because, unintentional or not, I loved it. ^_^ Great free form piece, and a nice, enjoyable read. Lovely.
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