[Gurdit]

I really liked the structure. I think it goes perfectly with your tone/message. A short word, followed by a short sentence, followed by a sort of explanation for your curtness. As you said, it's like anger with a dignified countenance. It's anger or irritation, yet it doesn't take petty forms like violence or shouting.

You choice of words, as usual, was immaculate. I've interpreted this in two ways (one with your help), and in both interpretations, I wouldn't change a single word. It's poems like these that really make me enjoy reading poems more than writing them (and that's a rarety).