Did you intend “known?”
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However, this was only know by those who believed in predestination and Death himself, mainly due to the ignorance of man.
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Question, would it not seem less awkward by changing the following?
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Few people bother recognizing something that is looking them in the face.
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(Original) Few people bother recognizing that something is looking (perhaps “staring”) them in the face.
Again, I think you meant “known.”
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One last, extremely well known fact is that…
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What if instead of “force,” twice…History, in face, was a force, a (power, entity, influence) stronger than God, (take out even).
I understand that is a humorous submission, but what about using “ashes,” in replacement of “dust.” Dust seems too cruel.