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Old 01-12-2007, 12:39 PM
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Re: Hank Swift - The Vendetta

hmm, certainly intresting for a western setting. I honestly like a good spaghetti western... but to the story

It was plenty good. im interested in the continued adventures of hank, even tho you probably wont write another.

one gripe i had, and a constant gripe that i have, is it's just a bit too... "undiferrent." Plenty of westerns have been written or acted in a similar style to this story. grant you...its a kinda narrow topic; good guy, bad guy, in the west, horses, etc. Not that this is bad; its the requirements for a western.

youre highlight are the characters. you dont use an extreme amount of dialouge, but what dialouge you use amplifies your characters 10 fold.

well written on a narrow topic, with great 3-d characters. kudos
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