[Masa]

You know Timmay, as people, you and I may clash from time to time, but as a writer I must say good work. It was a good piece, very good, I enjoyed your use of military-lingo useful for identification as well as parralels to most viewpoints from the British. Trenchwar is hell, and your descriptions really brought that to life, from the smell of the gore to the visual devastation. I have noted no irritants, and find this a very decent read. Cheers Timmay, good work!