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Old 06-12-2007, 08:45 AM
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Re: Hours Ago...

A Non-Fictional story? Interesting. This reminds me of my “Stalker” submission, but of course that is Fictional.

I think perhaps the suspense could be more in-depth, but this is only one opinion. The rational thought ending this dilemma seems reasonable.
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