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Old 10-12-2007, 09:16 AM
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Re: Mirror of My Mind

Hmmm...interesting. Love the second section especially. And what a sad, poignant last line! But I have to say that I'm also curious about the style. Is it a particular rhyming structure, or just free verse with some end rhymes?
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