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Old 10-12-2007, 09:21 AM
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Re: Still It Is So

I've got to agree with earlier comments: it certainly would lend itself well to music. Very emotional and fluid, and I like the unusual form. Bolded and unbolded stanzas also added emphasis and enhanced the poem overall. Absolutely heartwrenching. Great stuff.
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